Red poppies

It’s the day to remember those who fought for the Australia. This is especially sad for me…
So I tried to Make a change. I was gonna Make a lot of poppies for those who have lost someone or their family in the war.i managed to make 374 before I stoped on the day I was tired, but it was worth it. I tried to make it to every one but I had only 43 left. I felt sad for those who didn’t get one.
But at least I made some peoples day. I still felt sad.

1 Comment on Red poppies

  1. Aine O Sullivan
    November 17, 2019 at 8:03 AM (4 years ago)

    Hi Riley, Well done. Try writing ‘I was going to’ instead of ‘gonna’. Watch your capital letters and spell check before you submit your story. Keep up the good work. Mrs O’ Sullivan.

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