13
Mar
2019
Mar
2019
Emty what an surprise
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Empty what a surprise
I just hoped in the car and I turned the key the car wouldn’t start. I was wondering what was wrong. I checked the petroleum and it was empty what a surprise I filled it up yesterday I wondered why. I checked one last time it was still empty. I asked by friend and so he said he will take a look. But he couldn’t find what happened so I went to the petroleum shop and I put some petroleum in and it leaked I went to the shops and got a case and it was all fixed
5j2018
March 13, 2019 at 10:37 PM (5 years ago)Well done Cloee, I really liked your use of this week’s prompt. Remember to read over your work to check for errors and have a look to make sure you’ve included all the necessary punctuation. Great effort Cloee.
Mr Lynam
lsmith70
March 14, 2019 at 4:47 PM (5 years ago)Great job 👍 Cloee but I think you need to read over it when you are finished and make sure you have correct spelling and watch were your put your punctuation when you need it.