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Sep
2019
Sep
2019
The frozen friends
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We were playing as normal kids still no one went near the house of doom. It got more scary the owner came out he looked like he’d done a crime. I was going insane but I think it was true he walked back into the house of doom. So we continue to play then everything stopped and it was like they were frozen but I was not then they were not frozen except Georgia. we were scared we thought the owner of the house of doom did it we ran for our life Georgia unfroze we were relived.
Mrs O Sullivan
September 23, 2019 at 10:53 PM (5 years ago)Hi Imogine,
What a scary story! I wouldn’t like to visit the House of Doom. Watch out for capital letters and full stops. Try and write shorter sentences. Keep writing!
Mrs O Sullivan (Team 100WC)
Cork, Ireland.