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The pirates treasure
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The pirates treasure
There was an old pirate ship that crashed thousands of years ago, there was only one survivor, Captain Awesome Pants. he was injured and bruised but he was ok. He saw a ship in the distance and blew a help horn, they came over and said, “arg me pirate what you doing around these seas?”
“ I’m lost and my ship crashed” Captain Awesome Pants said.
“well you would be a good crew mate,”
“That could be a good idea, but is there treasure we could find?”
“Yes that is what we are looking for.” So they went to the island where the treasure lay.They saw it, but its empty. What a surprise!
5j2018
March 12, 2019 at 1:01 PM (5 years ago)Great effort Jayden, what an interesting name for a pirate. I know it is hard to keep your story to so few words but you have really worked hard to make this happen. Keep working on your punctuation.
Greg Lynam
lsmith70
March 13, 2019 at 3:42 PM (5 years ago)Great job Jayden, the first bit of your story was a bit 😦 but then the sor got
Better and better. The name that you gave the pirate was very funny 😁 but
I really really liked that you named it
Captain awesome pants👍👍🎆🎆🏝🏝
jnjeru
March 14, 2019 at 11:48 AM (5 years ago)Thank you please comment nicely and give some nice 👍 story point outs
jnjeru
March 14, 2019 at 11:49 AM (5 years ago)Did you like my story (trying to start a conversation)
cchessher
March 14, 2019 at 11:50 AM (5 years ago)Your story was 😉 and then it went good because you named your pirate weirdly and good discrbing word 👑 i’am very surprise that the person survived and i felt so sad for captain ausome pants 👖 that is a very interesting story
Mrs Boyce
March 17, 2019 at 4:48 PM (5 years ago)Hi Jayden,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I hope they still help Captain Awesome Pants although the treasure chest was empty.
I wonder who got to it first?
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/