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The lost teddy bear
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One day a 7 year old boy named Daniel was playing with his teddy and his mum was at the shop and his dad was at work so for now he was home alone and he thought of going outside to play on the trampoline so he went and started playing then he through his teddy In the air and he flew away in the wind all the way to the city so when his mum came home and Daniel and said “mum teddy flew to the city so they quickly drove to the city and they found his teddy and they drove home. THE END
5j2018
February 21, 2019 at 12:10 AM (5 years ago)Great effort Jayden, you were able to wrap your story up nicely in 100 words. Your reader would benefit from some more punctuation though to help them read your work with your intended meaning. Keep up your writing Jayden.
Mr Lynam
jnjeru
February 25, 2019 at 3:04 AM (5 years ago)Thanks I’ll try to use more punctuation.
jnjeru
February 25, 2019 at 3:03 AM (5 years ago)Hope I did a good job please comment nicely.
chutchison4j
February 25, 2019 at 3:03 AM (5 years ago)😍😎😜😄😃🧠
jnjeru
February 25, 2019 at 3:05 AM (5 years ago)Thank you Chase.
lsmith70
February 26, 2019 at 7:32 AM (5 years ago)Good job jayden
jnjeru
March 7, 2019 at 2:46 PM (5 years ago)Thank you everyone keep on commenting
Sandrine
March 12, 2019 at 6:36 PM (5 years ago)I really liked your story. It would be good know how you found the bear but it see it can be difficult in 100 words.