Trick or treat

It was Halloween night and we were going trick or treating. We asked a few people from our neighbourhood to come with us. We went to a persons house, it was creepy, it had toilet paper all over it. When they opened the door the people said, “trick or treat?”
We said, “treat!” Hoping that we would get candy. Instead of getting a lolly we got water dumped on our heads. We were all damp, we were so wet. We felt angry, shocked and scared, then they put slime through our hair. Then we smelled this delicious scent, it was pie and they gave it to us, YUM…..

Jazmine

3 Comments on Trick or treat

  1. Emilia
    November 5, 2019 at 12:45 AM (4 years ago)

    This is a great piece of work and the storyline is brilliant. the only slight issue there is, is that you didn’t use the prompt “the orange one spoke first”.
    This is an absolute amazing piece of work and I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! 🙂

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  2. Cloee chessher
    November 8, 2019 at 9:12 AM (4 years ago)

    Great work it was very descriptive but you forgot about the prompt

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    • Ryan
      November 8, 2019 at 11:35 PM (4 years ago)

      Nice story. use the prompt next time.

      Reply

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