The favourite gorilla

It’s was a nice beautiful morning and Pepper and Candy were locking up the zoo gates. Then they said that gorilla is so enormous and loud the gorilla was named Anna. Then one night Anna escaped out of the zoo the girls was searching every were for Anna every were they also went to a mountain and held a banana of it. They went on a helicopter looking out the windows they saw Anna covered in purple sticky stuff she climbed up a volcano . The girls said that Anna looked like a purple hairy gorilla swimming in a volcano full of lava with a banana in its mouth. Key 🍌=🦍

Jazmine

1 Comment on The favourite gorilla

  1. Michelle Tham
    July 31, 2019 at 11:02 AM (5 years ago)

    Hi Jazmine,
    Well done in including all of the prompt words. I smiled when I saw that they were all together in the last sentence. Very clever! I wonder what the purple sticky stuff was all over Anna’s hairy body?

    Remember to use your punctuation to help make it easier to follow your story and to know when people are talking.

    Well done,
    Michelle Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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