The surpise

“Gerald, where are you?” Screamed Gerald’s mum. Mum was starting to get worried because she could not hear or find me anywhere. I was going to stay hidden all day and then when mum has a shower later I will jump out and…..”Gerald come here right now!” said mum in anger. The day had gone by and mum had not found me yet. Then it was time to scare mum. She walked past me and I went BOOO!!!! She started screaming.” Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing”. Then mum started laughing. That was the best day ever.

1 Comment on The surpise

  1. Aelish
    May 16, 2019 at 8:54 AM (5 years ago)

    I loved your story Leila and I liked how you said “said mum in anger” to describe how his mum was feeling.

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