05
Mar
2019
Mar
2019
The weird dream
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One dark and stormy night on a Saturday night there was a girl who liked bright red. When it was time for Zara to go to bed she had a weird dream about a ladder made out of sinking coins. She was climbing that strange ladder, Zara felt herself sinking down deep and deeper then she jumped. Zara woke up, she went to see her mother and father. They said, “you can sleep in are bed tonight.” The next morning she felt much better than last night.
mlambert4j
March 5, 2019 at 7:09 PM (5 years ago)Nice story I love it.
jwalker4j
March 7, 2019 at 5:55 PM (5 years ago)Great job Georgia tc : How it sounds like a weird dream good job your a popstar 👩🏻🎤
caydenans
March 8, 2019 at 1:10 AM (5 years ago)I liked your story a lot. What I liked about your story is the detail. What I also liked was that you actually put quotations.
mlambert4j
March 8, 2019 at 12:23 PM (5 years ago)Good job Georgia like it
Miss T
March 11, 2019 at 7:29 AM (5 years ago)Hi Georgia
I can see how you tried hard to create a story using the prompt words, I always find these the hardest stories to write. Using the idea of a dream meant that you could be a little imaginative with your ideas and it wouldn’t seem odd.
Miss T Team 100wc